https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Rchyi5TCvg
I did not receive many criticisms on my original pitch; however, I improved my pitch by being more clear about my product as well as mentioning the value that the feedback loop provides for instructors. I also worked on improving my hook. Let me know what other areas I can improve!
29A – Venture Concept
Venture Opportunity Opportunity Every year there are a few hundred thousand students that take standardized tests such as the GRE/GMAT/...
Raymond -
ReplyDeleteI really like your product concept because I truly feel this need should be met. With the amount of automation we have in education, we fall short on exams. It really aggravates me when teachers don't release answer keys or make your online exams open to show which answers you got right or wrong. I think that's important in going forward within your courses and learning from your mistakes. Your pitch was well informed and had great content that was relatable and understandable. I think where you can improve is just with your memorization and to avoid using "um" or "uh" between your points. Other than that minor improvement you did a great job!
Ray,
ReplyDeleteI really liked this pitch, especially since you gave viewers a hypothetical situation to start off. Also, I liked that you talked about other ways to check your answers, explaining why your idea is much better by pointing out their flaws. Also, the manner in which you spoke to your viewers was very good, i thought you spoke both loudly and clearly. Nice Job!